Thursday, September 13, 2007
Test story!!!
The story was kinda creepy, (I know a VERY scary story which i will tell you if you ask.) but the part that really grabbed my attention is when the officer said, "You all right son?". I felt like I really was waking up from a dream! I even felt like I was a little tired! It also felt so real when it showed Robert moving his arms and legs around to make sure he was still alive. I am against the whole "hypnosis" idea because I think that it is cruel. I mean, in first person, through your own eyes, would you like to be in a car accident? ( I didnt think so) Even a simulator for a crash would be better. I'm just not sure sure I would like to be thrown around on a subconcious level. About the ending, I think the whole thing was a dream and that he Imagined the whole thing! Well, either that or that is one messed up driving test!
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...Sounds weird...O_o
-Erica D
NOw I want to read it. or you can tell it to me at school or over the phone.
can u tell me or email me ur "scary story" plese
That sounds like a good story and would like to read the rest of it! I liked your metaphore, "I felt like I was woaking up from a dream". I could really picture that actually happening. Great job! Keep writing! ~Katie :]
WAking not woaking waking!!
Nice Blog kewl pictures. Like how u explained the test story.
hi and i also like your blog i read your stories and they r really well written
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